Not terribly funny or memorable
I'm gonna try to give you some constructive feedback so I don't sound like a complete asshole.
- Your animation style is... not the greatest. If you look back in about 2001-2004, most animations looked like this, so it gave your animation look dated and old. Maybe try animating things more fluently... I will say, I appreciate that you synced the mouths well.
- The audio quality was pretty bad. If you continue to make animations, I would consider investing in a halfway decent microphone. You could probably pick one up from Wal-Mart or something for 20 bucks that would get the job done better.
- The jokes were a little...eh. I chuckled a couple of times, but for the most part, I was kind of bored. Some things might of been funnier, but the voice acting wasn't the greatest.... it sounded like you were just reading off a paper.. it didn't really feel like it had much emotion.
- I'm not one to say I don't like inappropriate humor, cuz I do, but the boob and dick jokes weren't great. Try to keep that to a minimum in the future, unless you have something completely kickass that you know people will like.
- It was really long. Maybe in the future try breaking it up into parts to keep people's attention.
But, I appreciate your effort, and it's better than I can do. Just keep working at it.
fair enough fair enough, i always appreciate constructive criticism... i do agree i have to buy a better microphone and the animation lacks because i taught myself how to animation in flash, but i am gradually improving haha, my skills r mostly in writing
Attention people, this isn't made by Krinkles
Cm on, people should know that this isn't Krinkles style of art.
People are probably just confused because it says "Made by Krinkles" at the end... you probably should of put something like, original idea by Krinkles or something like that.
Good animation though... reminds me of an animation similar that I saw on Madness Day with a character that shook a lot... did you make that one too?
Yeah, probably "Madness created by Krinkels" possibly
And yes I did.
Great movie, just one complaint
Excellent graphics, excellent story, excellent use of audio... just one thing that bothered me... I set the movie to high quality, and every time there was a new scene, the quality would go back to low! That bothered me, since my computer was fast enough to run it on high, so I had to keep changing it back mid movie. You should put an option at the beginning for what quality you want to watch it throughout the whole movie.
Kinda weird... with no plot... but your drawing was pretty good, and the end was kinda funny with the yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. My advice is to work on your mouth animation a lil more, and the animation will be great.
Since my last comment got deleted...
I'll say this again, since my last comment got deleted for some reason.
I was expecting that to suck, but it didn't... lol. The sound quality was FANTASTIC, and the animation was sucky, but sucky in a way where it was funny, not noob. Thumbs up from me.
DBZ = GAY PORN
Keep the fuck shut up
Cock YES bitch!
By the way, my most favorite parody ever. Just to let you know.
You did a good job with the animation, but it's way too short. Instead of making 30 episodes or whatever, you should make one big one. Then, it would be sweet.
So, if they were all 20 seconds, you'd want all 30 to be combined...?
30 x 20=600 seconds, which is actually: 10 minutes (I think)
I don't think that ANYONE would wait that long for a flash, but thanks none the less man.
It'd be nice if I could actually understand what you were saying. You tend to slur all your words together. Other than that, decent flash. I've always kinda liked frame by frame, so that's why you're getting a better score.
I liked it!
The only thing is, its only 2 faces! You should make a bigger variety of faces, and keep going with it here! I'd definitely watch another tutorial if you made one.
I agree with Clown
The animation was decent, but the writing was pretty bad. The spiderman one was kind of funny, and the flash one was alright too, but overall, it was pretty lame.
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