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Not terribly funny or memorable

I'm gonna try to give you some constructive feedback so I don't sound like a complete asshole.
- Your animation style is... not the greatest. If you look back in about 2001-2004, most animations looked like this, so it gave your animation look dated and old. Maybe try animating things more fluently... I will say, I appreciate that you synced the mouths well.
- The audio quality was pretty bad. If you continue to make animations, I would consider investing in a halfway decent microphone. You could probably pick one up from Wal-Mart or something for 20 bucks that would get the job done better.
- The jokes were a little...eh. I chuckled a couple of times, but for the most part, I was kind of bored. Some things might of been funnier, but the voice acting wasn't the greatest.... it sounded like you were just reading off a paper.. it didn't really feel like it had much emotion.
- I'm not one to say I don't like inappropriate humor, cuz I do, but the boob and dick jokes weren't great. Try to keep that to a minimum in the future, unless you have something completely kickass that you know people will like.
- It was really long. Maybe in the future try breaking it up into parts to keep people's attention.

But, I appreciate your effort, and it's better than I can do. Just keep working at it.

JunkYardAnimations responds:

fair enough fair enough, i always appreciate constructive criticism... i do agree i have to buy a better microphone and the animation lacks because i taught myself how to animation in flash, but i am gradually improving haha, my skills r mostly in writing

Attention people, this isn't made by Krinkles

Cm on, people should know that this isn't Krinkles style of art.

People are probably just confused because it says "Made by Krinkles" at the end... you probably should of put something like, original idea by Krinkles or something like that.

Good animation though... reminds me of an animation similar that I saw on Madness Day with a character that shook a lot... did you make that one too?

Alienslushie responds:

Yeah, probably "Madness created by Krinkels" possibly
And yes I did.

Great movie, just one complaint

Excellent graphics, excellent story, excellent use of audio... just one thing that bothered me... I set the movie to high quality, and every time there was a new scene, the quality would go back to low! That bothered me, since my computer was fast enough to run it on high, so I had to keep changing it back mid movie. You should put an option at the beginning for what quality you want to watch it throughout the whole movie.

Odd

Kinda weird... with no plot... but your drawing was pretty good, and the end was kinda funny with the yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. My advice is to work on your mouth animation a lil more, and the animation will be great.

Painfully short

You did a good job with the animation, but it's way too short. Instead of making 30 episodes or whatever, you should make one big one. Then, it would be sweet.

HellBentGoose responds:

So, if they were all 20 seconds, you'd want all 30 to be combined...?

30 x 20=600 seconds, which is actually: 10 minutes (I think)

I don't think that ANYONE would wait that long for a flash, but thanks none the less man.

Speak Clearly!

It'd be nice if I could actually understand what you were saying. You tend to slur all your words together. Other than that, decent flash. I've always kinda liked frame by frame, so that's why you're getting a better score.

I liked it!

The only thing is, its only 2 faces! You should make a bigger variety of faces, and keep going with it here! I'd definitely watch another tutorial if you made one.

I agree with Clown

The animation was decent, but the writing was pretty bad. The spiderman one was kind of funny, and the flash one was alright too, but overall, it was pretty lame.

I had hope

At the beginning of the flash, I was hopeful, cuz it seemed that the animation was going to be decent, but it turned into a pretty lazy and lame frame by frame. Put more work into it, and you might have something more.

How is this rated so good?

I mean, this animation wasn't terrible, but it wasn't very good either. The humor was pretty lame, and the animation was pretty basic and bland. Plus, the voice acting was pretty lame too, especially whoever did the voice for the reporter on the TV... you could definitely tell that she was reading off of a paper or something. Overall, a pretty mediocre flash that somehow got a 4 rating... I personally think it deserves more in the 2.5 - 3 range.

I do soundboards. I kind of do animation, but I don't have enough time or talent to make anything worthwhile yet, so until that day of talent and time hit me, I will continue to waste my life on making soundboards. The end

Colton Crook @ColtronZero

Age 35, Male

Student

WHS

Waterloo Illinois

Joined on 4/29/05

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