Not terribly funny or memorable
I'm gonna try to give you some constructive feedback so I don't sound like a complete asshole.
- Your animation style is... not the greatest. If you look back in about 2001-2004, most animations looked like this, so it gave your animation look dated and old. Maybe try animating things more fluently... I will say, I appreciate that you synced the mouths well.
- The audio quality was pretty bad. If you continue to make animations, I would consider investing in a halfway decent microphone. You could probably pick one up from Wal-Mart or something for 20 bucks that would get the job done better.
- The jokes were a little...eh. I chuckled a couple of times, but for the most part, I was kind of bored. Some things might of been funnier, but the voice acting wasn't the greatest.... it sounded like you were just reading off a paper.. it didn't really feel like it had much emotion.
- I'm not one to say I don't like inappropriate humor, cuz I do, but the boob and dick jokes weren't great. Try to keep that to a minimum in the future, unless you have something completely kickass that you know people will like.
- It was really long. Maybe in the future try breaking it up into parts to keep people's attention.
But, I appreciate your effort, and it's better than I can do. Just keep working at it.